Compared to other core countries, the United states has a higher firearm death rate. According to CBS News, Americans are 25 times more likely to be shot. compared to tje U.s. Japan has a total firearm death rate of 0. An assistant professor at the school of community health science, states that firearms are killing us instead of protecting us. This shows that the U.S. is more likely to use guns to resolve conflicr than other country. In 1996, Australia experienced its deadlists mass shooting in history, in which 35 people died and 23 were injured. The Australian givernment responded to the massacre by banning semi- automatics, pump action shotguns, and automatics. After the gun law chnge, gun deaths decreased by 7.5 percent each year. Every 640,000 guns were turned into the australian government. However, in the United states, the 2nd Amendment guarantees "A well regulated Militia, being necessary to the security of a free state, the right people to keep and bear armys, shall not be infringed." I believe that the 2nd Amendement should not protect the rigth of people to own assault rifles. I feel this way because there isn't any good things coming of the rigth to have guns and the only reason for guns is to protect our selves from others with guns. In" How U.S. gun deaths compare to other countries","Americans are 10 times more likely to be killed by guns than people in other core countries," This evidence illustrates my claim because its saying being killed by gun is more likely to happen to you, but in other countries it isn't that much likely to happen to any other core gun violence contries. According to NBC News," Mass killings such as those in Charleston, chattanooga and Lafayette continue with alarming frequency across the U.S. a recent study found one occurs in america every two weeks." this evidence shows my claim because all the guns is doing is bring up the death rate in the united states and creating a bigger problem for other citizens. In conclusion the 2nd amendment protect people gun right isn't need at all because it causes bigger problem for people isn't helping anyone, which means no guns and no need for protect with guns from guns.
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I agree with your statement because the american people are not using their right to own guns well. The american people seem to take advantage of the nice things that are given to us. You have a really strong claim and excellent pieces of evidence.